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Love is a spray

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Sometimes it saves
Slabs, hurts and prays;
When it comes easy
It diffuse freely…

Like an internet
It is connected
It maybe denied
It maybe delayed

But should it come
It comes to stay
Fuel and a fire
Easily inflamed.

It is a big deal
Really hard to find
It is blind, and kind
Till the end of time.

It extinguishes
The flames of desires
Across boundaries
In far and nigh.

Like air particles
Trapped in bottles
It awaits to spray,
Its sweet scent away.

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13 Comments

  1. Ohhhwillow says:

    Fourth stanza is so delicate to the ear – a real joy to read. You have a soft and lyrical voice, with just the right amount of metaphor. 😊👌 My only remark would be to consider your use of the word ‘nigh’; perhaos I misunderstand, though it feels slightly distracted from your overall message.. In any event, this brightened my break at work – thank you for that!

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  2. inaloveworld says:

    It is a real pleasure to read it! Thank you for sharing!

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  3. Vivian Zems says:

    “It is blind, and kind
    Till the end of time.” My best line😊

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Mr.Obeezy says:

    Fuel and then fire…the whole concept of how love is indeed a ripple on a frozen sea spreading to the farthest coast. Beautiful piece.

    Liked by 1 person

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