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Tone: for the love

You are my heart bam
healer of my wounds
the greens in my farm

And as an actor
I shouldn’t play with
Characters on you

So I have chosen
To refill your lungs
As the thing you breath

Air, land or water
with emphatic joy
and bundle of love

Do kindly perceive
smells of affection
As I reiterate

Please retaliate
For the good loving
I shower on you.

©2018 Vinzpoetry.wordpress.com
Onyeche Vincent Onyekachukwu

5 Comments

  1. johnlmalone says:

    A strong opening with the ‘heart balm’ image and the ‘actor’ metaphor. Great pic btw :)

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  2. Vinz says:

    Thank You John Malone, though I wonder why this poem had a net traffic of 3000 views

    Liked by 1 person

  3. johnlmalone says:

    I think Vinz undoubtedly it was the stunning bath picture, but then it was the strong opening metaphors especially the heart balm one and the greening of your farm. The grammar is a little shaky in the actor metaphor but it adds to its charm. It’s a sincere and loving poem. I see you’ve been blogging for many years. Well done. 3000 views! Wow! I’m envious :)

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