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Somonka: off reds by Vinx and Laura

Breaks my heart to remember
I once thought that forever
We could last as good poetry
But unlike the broken pieces
You are lost in unused ink.

I know you are so convinced
I never did existed
But don’t you remember;
When it was love it was love
Not the hate-red you paint it.

© 2018 Http://vinzpoetry.wordpress.com
And
http://thelaurapoetry.wordpress.com

Written by Onyeche Vincent Onyekachukwu and Ananaba Laura

Notes:
Below is the original tanka by Laura, I (Vinz) modified and added mine (Above)…

“It breaks my heart to remember
I once thought
We would last as long as poetry
I watch the sun set
I’m convinced you went with it”

Disclaimer: it was just a collaboration of poetry for fun and publication not a display of affection or heartbreak please


30 Comments

  1. Neemat says:

    👏🏼 for you both: “we could last a good poetry”- this could be us, you were lost in unused ink”- you were lost elsewhere(another)

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  2. Neemat says:

    “When it WAS love it was love”- when love dey e Dey well well, “but you painted it hat-red”- i see cupboard love here.

    I hope I didn’t derail, lovely write you guys did 💋

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  3. Neemat says:

    Yimu,😏 we know that’s impossible and besides, I’ve said it severally, I’m not so poetic and all

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