Flames and ices collide
Waning into harmattan
Voices catch the cold.
Home » Nigeria Blogger » Forms & Structures » Haiku » Haiku: Coarse harmattan voice
Haiku: Coarse harmattan voice
©2018 http://Vinzpoetry.wordpress.com
7 Comments
Comment
Latest Posts
-
I am losing hope
I hate it so bad When I heard I am A talent, I swear I am losing hope On the ink and pen Blow off…
-
Tone: Mrs me
Satisfaction is the result Sandwiching the gigantic cake That she effortlessly bakes. These love portions are the sweetest So authentic far from fake Someday she…
-
Tone: Sauces and pots
In cooking pots, Her spices and salts Makes the best sauce. These cooking pots Are love enduring All steams and ashes… The spices and salts…
-
Vinz wedding IV
VINIFY19 You are all invited. For more information and solicitations contact me via Email – vinpella02@gmail.com WhatsApp number +2347081613455 Phone number +2348035071987 Thank you .
Would have preferred flame and ice collide or dust and ice collide…for harmattan
LikeLiked by 1 person
Just after the consonant “s” so it can resound “voices” (line 3) , I guess.
LikeLike
There is no need. It’s a haiku.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Okay… I will see to it and see if it looks better.
LikeLike
Harmattan season, is known for a mix in hot and cold wind.
LikeLike
I think it will but they are your thoughts. They can be wholly independent lines describing the same thing where one without the other two are incomplete…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Okay, I understand you.
LikeLike