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Haiku: Coarse harmattan voice

Flames and ices collide
Waning into harmattan
Voices catch the cold.

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Onyeche Vincent Onyekachukwu

7 Comments

  1. Wordcipher says:

    Would have preferred flame and ice collide or dust and ice collide…for harmattan

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  2. Wordcipher says:

    I think it will but they are your thoughts. They can be wholly independent lines describing the same thing where one without the other two are incomplete…

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