My curiosity asks
Questions mortals fear, for
Sorrows to disappear.
Pray for me, I have done
An unspeakable thing
No mortal ever did.
Against my flesh, my bone
Has led me into hell
Challenging immortals
Pray for me, I have done
An unspeakable thing
No mortal ever did.
Stretching arms to both ends
Breaking doors and drawing
Swords with the gods of war.
Pray for me, I have done
An unspeakable thing
No mortal ever did.
Wedging war against all;
The Angels and demons
Are both in alliance.
Pray for me, I have done
An unspeakable thing
No mortal ever did…
Pray for me, to endure
The chokes of my own dust
When the wind of pain blows…
Pray for me, I have done
An unspeakable thing
No mortal ever did.
Vinzpoetry 
Don’t know how to describe my emotions… we all go through this in some phase of life… very well described…
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I can completely relate
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Wow! Brilliant write
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Thank you Muntazir
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Very lovely poem. The repetition in the poem is very compelling. I think the last word of the first line should read ‘asks’ rather than ‘ask’
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Okay, thank you for your observation, would see to correction. Thank you sir
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You’re most welcome Vinz
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I love the lines: “Pray for me, to endure the chokes of my own dust – when the wind of pain blows…” Amazing!
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Thank you, Author L.R. Rutherford. I appreciate
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Don’t worry. Jesus died for all our sins. All you need to do is repent and pray
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Sure advice to take…. After all his soul would be in shreds within dust particles in heaven and hell, at the end of the day.
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