You are wow
Wow to me…
Deep I am
Into you
In sequence
We made love
A vacation
A great trip…
Riding alone
All with you
In a nick of time
You touched me
With a tip
Of your finger
I felt heaven
Showers on me…
Unseen spiral
Around my body
Out of the blues
Came a kiss
Focusing on
Such a surprise;
The hot kiss
Became sweeter…
Reaching for
Your loaf behind
With the sweetness
Came a bliss
And the stars
All came out
With a blissful
Light for the night
And your breath
Smelt like life
A night like this
Should please repeat.
“And your breath smelt like life.” Great line!
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Thank you Bocks Susi, so glad you not only read but commented. Thanks
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You’re very welcome!
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Nice love poem. I smiled at ‘your loaf behind’. :)
Thanks for following my blog, which is appreciated.
Best wishes, Pete.
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I am so glad you liked it.. Expressions in poetry are always awesome.. Thank you Pete
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